Board Thread:Roleplaying/@comment-25826165-20150914190422/@comment-25826165-20150920005545

(so wrongggg.)

(Well, for starters:


 * The headshape looks quite off and rushed.


 * The hair and hat aren't neat at all.


 * Her body is WAY too thin.


 * Hands are too small.


 * In my opinion, some of the colors don't fit together well.


 * Eyes need more detail.)