Thread:Motionless/@comment-26218043-20150809214246/@comment-25826165-20150818193935

Okay, hbleh:

- Sentences shouldn't just be like "___________. __________. "_________." __________." That's boring. Add some pizazz and different sentence lengths, (but don't try to overdo it) like this: ""__________!" _________? _______________. etc."

- Try not to use the same words over and over again, like 'said'. Different words give it different and better value, like 'exclaimed' or something like that.

- Details. Though you shouldn't detail it to the point where your whole post details a tiny bee, you should still detail your posts so the reader can get a good visual in their mind.

- The length of each paragraph should be around four to six sentences, and having lots of sentences in one paragraph just makes it a large clump of text.

- Be confident! Even if you see users who appear to have a better grasp on paragraph roleplaying, you'll be them if you keep practicing. Don't give up.

Yes.