Board Thread:Fun and Games/@comment-26369190-20150313182035/@comment-26369190-20150314173249

I see. Could you possibly specify what is bland about Edgar, that I may amend it?

Dan/Felix: These two, I feel, are incorrectly executed. As you stated, they always duel. The "heroic manly men who always duel and show no emotion" Archetype is utilised here.

Krazy/Kevin: I enjoy these characters, their playful banter, and seriousness. If you wish for your character to be sophisticated, look towards these two.

Zack/Tess: These two are a splendid example of what a main character (Or duo) should be, and act like.

Shade: She is Dan and Felix, done correctly. She shows emotion and weakness, but, is strong willed.