Thread:Freddy's little helper/@comment-25826165-20150815195903/@comment-25826165-20150909212017

(Coooool!)

Quail shrugged. "I see..."

Name: Jason Storm - Hgraaah, I don't know why, but the last name doesn't fit. Don't worry, it's a small detail.

Appearance: Seeeeems nice. For some reason, I feel like he should have a more detailed type of clothing.

Personality: Ehh, it's okay. A part of it seems kind of cliched, though. It really depends on the kind of role plays or stories he'll be in. In general, it should be worked on.

Extra Info: Seeeeeems nice. The detail on a gun seems kind of unneeded. I'd love to see more in this category.